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I like to write stuff every once in a while, mostly things that just come to me.

Here’s some plots of short stories that I’ve written:

  • A story about some teenage kids that go missing in the late 90s and are trapped in an old boomer shooter, they think they’re fighting and shooting monsters, but they’re causing real world damage, and the enemies are real people.

  • 2 brothers move into a small town suddenly one day, one was a skilled candy confectioner, and the other was a gynecologist. The gynecologist would give sweets to his patients that were pregnant, and the babies inside got a taste for the candyman brother’s shop.. almost too much of a taste.

  • A diner in the middle of nowhere always seems to be in full capacity by the same regulars. These regulars started gradually getting more obese as portraits of deceased top-visiting regulars from years past crowded the decorated walls of the diner. Heart failures, clogged arteries, why would they care if it was the best dang food ever?
Those are probably my top 3 favorite— anyways, share stories you’ve written in this thread.
 
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Working on a book rn, still a work in progress but feel free to give me any tipps on how I could flesh out the characters some more ^_^
 
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nvtral said:
never write noob these plots are so bad i think i genuinely want to take my eyes out after reading these
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I’m sorry that you have no taste— stupid boy. Stupid brown boy— stupid, stupid noob. Thats what you are, you’re a brown noob. I’m gonna kill you. I’ll— I’ll fuckin’ grab you by yer head and start flailing you around. I’ll flail you around so hard that your brain’ll be all shaken like some googly eyes.

You wouldn’t survive since I’m also much taller and sreal womanger than you. You’re- you’re my BITCH.

I’m sorry that you had no taste before I killed you in real life, maybe in Hell (because there’s where you’re goin’) they’ll teach you some manners and the ability to be a functional literate. Fucking ridiculous, you’re ridiculous
 
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I want to write book about Biharian pig farmer who comes from dirt-poor dalit family and is dummyed shitskin until he hits his head and gets an IQ of 150. and then becomes BharatBvll and uses his PhD in physics to get a visa and rape women in Canada. and then he becomes the world Rape King and every military is after him after raping 5,000 women and it leads to a standoff in the Himalayas in his BJP bunker where he dies a hero in a blaze of glory
 
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I once wrote a story about the NSA finding humans made out of wood called "Woodalans" on the North Sentinel Island and truly decided to take them to Arkansas and everything went fine right before one of their neighbours who was a KKK member mistook them for being African Americans and this made the other Woodalans who saw this get really pissed because they thought humanity hated them so they decided to raid the neighbourhood they were in and took all the resources and supplies necessary to cause THD and they expanded themselves further by crafting more of themselves using trees and they went into cities and military bases where they would attempt to "colonise" every country but then the US government took notice of this and started "Operation: Lumberjack" where they would create these things called "Land Separation Machines" that was able to split land in half and the entire point of the operation was to split the land that the Woodalans were on to isolate them and to make them starve and die but this would cause consequences because the Woodalans would create their own republic called "The Republic Of The Wooden" and every country effected by Operation: Lumberjack would then start to form their own republic and commonwealths and everything goes in hell for them.

btw this story is still continuing as of this being written
 
SHATION LORE!

To understand the history of the landmass and political supranational union of the same name, we need to understand the history of Juan Edgar Soyim. Discoverer, founder of the supranational union and current president of Soyim, the biggest nation in the continent (it just is okay), Soyim was born to a relatively well-off family in the former perpetually rainy hyper-industrialized nation of [REDACTED] not much is known about this period of Juan Edgar's life which may not even be his real name as no official government document after his emigration to /POL/and in late 2024 has been found. Many people suggest Edgar Soyim might have hoped from nation to nation in search of a new home before finally deciding to settle in the district for it's perceived freedom a scarce resource in other places he had traveled to specially his former homeland, as he became more assimilated into soyculture he began to branch out into the wider soymmunity including visiting other districts such as /soy/ and /raid/ even being the creator of the successful draw a fish raid. Despite enjoying his time there soon it dawned on him that he had arrived at the dying end of a great soyciety with the current admin (speculated to be admin 6) and his cabal of jannies mismanaging the site and enacting repressive policies that soon impacted soyim. As a proud person of color he suffered heavily from the brownocaust and was soygregated to his main home /POL/ and now /INT/ he often disguised himself through fake passports to enter /soy/ doe, even if it was worthless as the decline was even more evident after this.

During all of this time something had always remained at the back of soyim's mind that something was to return to his homeland and try to make a difference despite everything. To no longer care about the consequences anymore, to finally have fun again in the place he had abandoned for so long to create a beacon of freedom in the shadow of trans rights and Anticaca, and so with these desires in mind he explored the waters east of the recently taken over Jarty (now the IRC chat) and found a continent intact (ignore the fact that civilizations had existed in that continent for billions of years now) he Christened this virgin land as the Shation a portmanteau of Sharty and Nation or maybe he just made some shit up idk. Either way the purpose of this new continent was clear to him to create a truly Sharty colony in the 'states and spread soyvilization to his former homeland. He shilled the Shation day and night in the trenches of /POL/ /INT/ and even /soy/ millions of soylonists were enticed to join xhim in this new adventure and went on to create their own settlements and nations. Today the Shation is home to 19 different nations some that were even native polities that willingly joined the supranational union.

Unfortunately for Soyim xhe would be permanently banished from the Sharty as a result of distributing discorddrama.irrelevanty encyclopedias containing splinter links. A grave sin in the Quotist administration. Evicted from his adoptive homeland Soyim now focuses on his own project inviting more colonists indirectly through the greater soysphere, only time will tell the fate of the colonists or of soyim, but so far things have been going well.
 
I was really obsessed about Minions and WW2 back when i was a caca
1923
It Was an Snowy Day

An Soviet Officer was Going to her Tver Her House from Moscow. Unfortunately Her Car would stop on a Roadway to Klin. Soviet Officer Freak and starts looking for an thing that will power her car. However it was Evening, The Around was just
Foggy White Wasteland he thinks walking is a better choice. he does it and walks towards to The Fog. He got hungry and Traumazied he wanted to go back.

He Turns Back and before he starts to walk he Hears an Voice. An Pretty Pretty Pretty Pitchy Voice From her back. He turns to the source of the Voice and
walks to there.

And... He saws The Ice Cave. he refused to go there first since he doesnt have any supplies. He got hypnotized Where he should go?

He could be walking on the road; But thats Dangerous
because there is a chance of him getting hit by a car while walking on the road.

If he go to the Ice Cave; well there might be something Like bears. However He really wanted to know whats behind this Voice? was it a bear or an unknown
Civilization or an undiscovered Animal? Maybe even a Alien?

he got no idea. He just standed on the middle. Until he hear an Car sound passing by him He was saved.

He got on the Road and Started Screaming:

-HEEEEEEEEY! HEEEEEEEEEEY! I AM HERE PICK ME UP PLEASE I AM STUCK HERE!

Luckily the car passing by him was an Military Car. The Car Stopped and the Driver Said:

Driver: How can you get Stuck Here you little Cycka Blat.

Sovier Officer: Uhh sorry my car got broken.

Driver: Well what you are doing there so.

Soviet Officer: Uh nothing, But there was some Strange sounds coming from the Ice Cave There.

Driver: Ice Cave? Man i passed this road like 600 times and i never saw an Ice Cave there
You are just Joking.

Soviet Officer: I am not! Stop the Car and i will show you.

Driver: well whatever lets go where you wanna go.

Soviet Officer: Tver.

Driver Drives to Tver. Drops the Soviet Officer to the Tver.

And... This Would be Forgotten for an entire year. why? Because of Driver Refusing There Is a Ice Cave there and Also Soviet Officer getting roasted by
Driver

Soviet Officer suddenly tries to forget that Pretty Pretty Pretty Pitch Voice to Present like He never got roasted by that Driver.

1924
Its an Good Day

The Soviet Officer is now Happy. He Enjoys walking around on The Red Square.

but somehow he feel a rock under her feet.

He looks at the rock. First he ignores it pretty badly. and then he remembers.

The Ice Cave.

He Directly Rushes into Stalin's Office.

*Door Opening*

Soviet Officer: STALIN! STALIN!*Heavy Breathe*

Stalin: What is it?

Soviet Officer: *Breathe* ok let me explain so 1 year ago my Car was stuck on a road between Klin and Moscow. And when i get out of my car i Heared a sound
from an Ice Cave Near.

Soviet Officer: Can we go to that Ice Cave? That sound was an Voice and it was pretty pitchy.

Stalin: Well i am interested. What if its Access to the Hell? You would get executed.

Soviet Officer: Please Stalin i beg you. What if there is an Civilization there?

Stalin: Ok ok, i am also coming with you.

Soviet Officer: Thank you.

Stalin Calls in the Red Army for that Ice Cave

After the long Travel. They finally Arrive to the Ice Cave

Stalin: So where is the Sound or Voice or Whatever?

Soviet Officer: Well it was Snowy and foggy when i hear the voice so i dont know the actual
Position of Ice Cave.

Stalin: Ok then we find it.

And the same Voice appears again but its now much more emoteless.
Whatever Happened on the Ice Cave; It was a thing that made the thing on the Ice Cave
Bored.

Soviet Officer: THERE! THERE! THE SOUND! THERE IS THE ICE CAVE!

Stalin: MARCH FOR THAT ICE CAVE, WE WILL SOLVE THIS MYSTERY!

After Some Minutes they arrive at ice cave. And the thing they saw was So... Amazing

IT WAS MINIONS!

but Stalin and her Red Army didnt get it. What was those Yellow Bubble like things?

It was a Pretty big silence and Red army looking at bored Minions with Curiosity.

Then. A Minion Stared at Stalin, And Said:

-NEW BIG BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

and all the Minions started Screaming:

-YEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-BIG BOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
-BANANANAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-BOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

all the Minions Started to rush For Lenin and the red army then hug them

Stalin: Oh i see those yellow things are pretty cute

And a Minion Named Mel Has Appeared

Mel: We are also Immortal, It doesnt matter how many times you shoot us we remain the same

Stalin thought this was a joke

Stalin: Whoa? ok little yellow man. Shoot this guy!

Soviet Officer: Yes Sir

Mel: Wha.

*gun sound*

Stalin: Ha How Immorta.. Wait What?

Mel: Ugh. That Hurt

The Entire Red Army was suprised. That Minion got shot but didnt die or even bleed.

And Stalin had an idea, What about they use those Minions in wars Since they are Immortal? That would be Great.

Stalin: Silence!

Stalin: Ok, after this day, The Minions, The Immortals, Will be an Part of THE RED ARMY!

Minions: YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Mel: BIG BOSSS!!!

And Minions have found their new boss; Stalin. Or is it?

Minions Served The Soviet Union Pretty Nicely Pretty Pretty Nicely. And Most of all Mel Liked the Soviet Union alot.

They were doing Training, Gun Shooting, Operations and other stuff.

But Remember Minions have ever Killed Napoleon on the battle of Moscow. Accidently.

1935
It Was a pretty Normal Day. Minions were in Training. With Stalin.

And Minions Were started to get bored of Soviet Union Since they did no wars. But also Soviet Union Was using Minions to Spy on other Countries like USA
and That Germany.

Mel was an Agent to spy on Germany and he arrived back to Soviet Union and met with one of Her Friends Kevin.

Kevin: Hey Mel.

Mel: Bello.

Kevin: So how was Germany?

Mel: Well its just an Dictator Screaming.

Kevin: Ok, May i ask you if you are tired of this country too?

Mel: Yep. I hope There was an Regime in our likings.

Kevin: How sad.

And Mel got an idea. What if he destroyed current regime? Would be Good if he did. Mel started to look at void and started thinking. First he think of Flag
Then he think Of Ideology he will be using and he Decided to use Fascism like That Germany. And Kevin cut him.

Kevin: What are you thinking?

Mel: Uh Nothing.

Kevin: Well ok.

Mel really liked the country he created in her head. but to make it true he need to destroy The Current Regime.

Mel: Kevin?

Kevin: Poka?

Mel: Where is the gunsmhith?

Kevin points out the gunsmith and walks back to training center.

Kevin: There is it.

Mel Grabbed a Makarov from there. And got out of Gunsmith. Started to walk for Stalin.

And he saws that Stalin was just looking at the Minionese Training from the Balcony. He climbs upstairs and Arrives at the balcony Stalin is on.

Mel: Hey Stalin!

Stalin: What is it agent Mel? what you got for me?

Mel: A Secret Germany is Hiding from us, Come downstairs and i will tell you it.

They go down downstairs. and they stop at in middle of Stairs.

Stalin: Why did we stop?

Mel: I wanna tell it here.

Stalin: ok do it.

Mel pulls of the gun.

Stalin: what?

Mel: They know what weapons we are using.

Stalin: So? We know what they are using too

Mel: Well.

*gunshot*

Stalin: AAAAAAAAAAA

*gunshot*

Stalin: TRAITOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!

Stalin, Passes out of Bleeding.

Mel Directly runs away from dead body of Stalin.

However Red Army Arrives at dead body of Stalin.

Soviet Officer: Those Blats killed our leader what we do now?

And a Soldier Said:

Forget about our leader where is the Minions?

Soviet Officer: oh yeah, why they did run away from us, THEY MIGHT BE THE TRAITORS!

Soviet Officer: CAPTURE THEM!

the entire Soviet Union goes to alarm. And Splits into Several Countries with different Opinions of what happened. Some of them said Minions did it Some of
them said Stalin Killed herself.

However, Soviet Union Has Collapsed. Due to many many opinions.

While those things were happening. Mel and other Minions were actually on Ice Cave.

There was tons of years between 1924 and 1935 and everybody forgot about The Ice Cave.

However Minions thought this was an Horrible Event. Since their big boss passed out for a Reason they dont know about.

Minions were Mostly Crying for Stalin on the Ice Cave. And judging theirselfs.
 
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LesothoSoldier1488 said:
I was really obsessed about Minions and WW2 back when i was a caca
1923
It Was an Snowy Day

An Soviet Officer was Going to her Tver Her House from Moscow. Unfortunately Her Car would stop on a Roadway to Klin. Soviet Officer Freak and starts looking for an thing that will power her car. However it was Evening, The Around was just
Foggy White Wasteland he thinks walking is a better choice. he does it and walks towards to The Fog. He got hungry and Traumazied he wanted to go back.

He Turns Back and before he starts to walk he Hears an Voice. An Pretty Pretty Pretty Pitchy Voice From her back. He turns to the source of the Voice and
walks to there.

And... He saws The Ice Cave. he refused to go there first since he doesnt have any supplies. He got hypnotized Where he should go?

He could be walking on the road; But thats Dangerous
because there is a chance of him getting hit by a car while walking on the road.

If he go to the Ice Cave; well there might be something Like bears. However He really wanted to know whats behind this Voice? was it a bear or an unknown
Civilization or an undiscovered Animal? Maybe even a Alien?

he got no idea. He just standed on the middle. Until he hear an Car sound passing by him He was saved.

He got on the Road and Started Screaming:

-HEEEEEEEEY! HEEEEEEEEEEY! I AM HERE PICK ME UP PLEASE I AM STUCK HERE!

Luckily the car passing by him was an Military Car. The Car Stopped and the Driver Said:

Driver: How can you get Stuck Here you little Cycka Blat.

Sovier Officer: Uhh sorry my car got broken.

Driver: Well what you are doing there so.

Soviet Officer: Uh nothing, But there was some Strange sounds coming from the Ice Cave There.

Driver: Ice Cave? Man i passed this road like 600 times and i never saw an Ice Cave there
You are just Joking.

Soviet Officer: I am not! Stop the Car and i will show you.

Driver: well whatever lets go where you wanna go.

Soviet Officer: Tver.

Driver Drives to Tver. Drops the Soviet Officer to the Tver.

And... This Would be Forgotten for an entire year. why? Because of Driver Refusing There Is a Ice Cave there and Also Soviet Officer getting roasted by
Driver

Soviet Officer suddenly tries to forget that Pretty Pretty Pretty Pitch Voice to Present like He never got roasted by that Driver.

1924
Its an Good Day

The Soviet Officer is now Happy. He Enjoys walking around on The Red Square.

but somehow he feel a rock under her feet.

He looks at the rock. First he ignores it pretty badly. and then he remembers.

The Ice Cave.

He Directly Rushes into Stalin's Office.

*Door Opening*

Soviet Officer: STALIN! STALIN!*Heavy Breathe*

Stalin: What is it?

Soviet Officer: *Breathe* ok let me explain so 1 year ago my Car was stuck on a road between Klin and Moscow. And when i get out of my car i Heared a sound
from an Ice Cave Near.

Soviet Officer: Can we go to that Ice Cave? That sound was an Voice and it was pretty pitchy.

Stalin: Well i am interested. What if its Access to the Hell? You would get executed.

Soviet Officer: Please Stalin i beg you. What if there is an Civilization there?

Stalin: Ok ok, i am also coming with you.

Soviet Officer: Thank you.

Stalin Calls in the Red Army for that Ice Cave

After the long Travel. They finally Arrive to the Ice Cave

Stalin: So where is the Sound or Voice or Whatever?

Soviet Officer: Well it was Snowy and foggy when i hear the voice so i dont know the actual
Position of Ice Cave.

Stalin: Ok then we find it.

And the same Voice appears again but its now much more emoteless.
Whatever Happened on the Ice Cave; It was a thing that made the thing on the Ice Cave
Bored.

Soviet Officer: THERE! THERE! THE SOUND! THERE IS THE ICE CAVE!

Stalin: MARCH FOR THAT ICE CAVE, WE WILL SOLVE THIS MYSTERY!

After Some Minutes they arrive at ice cave. And the thing they saw was So... Amazing

IT WAS MINIONS!

but Stalin and her Red Army didnt get it. What was those Yellow Bubble like things?

It was a Pretty big silence and Red army looking at bored Minions with Curiosity.

Then. A Minion Stared at Stalin, And Said:

-NEW BIG BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

and all the Minions started Screaming:

-YEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-BIG BOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
-BANANANAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-BOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

all the Minions Started to rush For Lenin and the red army then hug them

Stalin: Oh i see those yellow things are pretty cute

And a Minion Named Mel Has Appeared

Mel: We are also Immortal, It doesnt matter how many times you shoot us we remain the same

Stalin thought this was a joke

Stalin: Whoa? ok little yellow man. Shoot this guy!

Soviet Officer: Yes Sir

Mel: Wha.

*gun sound*

Stalin: Ha How Immorta.. Wait What?

Mel: Ugh. That Hurt

The Entire Red Army was suprised. That Minion got shot but didnt die or even bleed.

And Stalin had an idea, What about they use those Minions in wars Since they are Immortal? That would be Great.

Stalin: Silence!

Stalin: Ok, after this day, The Minions, The Immortals, Will be an Part of THE RED ARMY!

Minions: YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Mel: BIG BOSSS!!!

And Minions have found their new boss; Stalin. Or is it?

Minions Served The Soviet Union Pretty Nicely Pretty Pretty Nicely. And Most of all Mel Liked the Soviet Union alot.

They were doing Training, Gun Shooting, Operations and other stuff.

But Remember Minions have ever Killed Napoleon on the battle of Moscow. Accidently.

1935
It Was a pretty Normal Day. Minions were in Training. With Stalin.

And Minions Were started to get bored of Soviet Union Since they did no wars. But also Soviet Union Was using Minions to Spy on other Countries like USA
and That Germany.

Mel was an Agent to spy on Germany and he arrived back to Soviet Union and met with one of Her Friends Kevin.

Kevin: Hey Mel.

Mel: Bello.

Kevin: So how was Germany?

Mel: Well its just an Dictator Screaming.

Kevin: Ok, May i ask you if you are tired of this country too?

Mel: Yep. I hope There was an Regime in our likings.

Kevin: How sad.

And Mel got an idea. What if he destroyed current regime? Would be Good if he did. Mel started to look at void and started thinking. First he think of Flag
Then he think Of Ideology he will be using and he Decided to use Fascism like That Germany. And Kevin cut him.

Kevin: What are you thinking?

Mel: Uh Nothing.

Kevin: Well ok.

Mel really liked the country he created in her head. but to make it true he need to destroy The Current Regime.

Mel: Kevin?

Kevin: Poka?

Mel: Where is the gunsmhith?

Kevin points out the gunsmith and walks back to training center.

Kevin: There is it.

Mel Grabbed a Makarov from there. And got out of Gunsmith. Started to walk for Stalin.

And he saws that Stalin was just looking at the Minionese Training from the Balcony. He climbs upstairs and Arrives at the balcony Stalin is on.

Mel: Hey Stalin!

Stalin: What is it agent Mel? what you got for me?

Mel: A Secret Germany is Hiding from us, Come downstairs and i will tell you it.

They go down downstairs. and they stop at in middle of Stairs.

Stalin: Why did we stop?

Mel: I wanna tell it here.

Stalin: ok do it.

Mel pulls of the gun.

Stalin: what?

Mel: They know what weapons we are using.

Stalin: So? We know what they are using too

Mel: Well.

*gunshot*

Stalin: AAAAAAAAAAA

*gunshot*

Stalin: TRAITOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!

Stalin, Passes out of Bleeding.

Mel Directly runs away from dead body of Stalin.

However Red Army Arrives at dead body of Stalin.

Soviet Officer: Those Blats killed our leader what we do now?

And a Soldier Said:

Forget about our leader where is the Minions?

Soviet Officer: oh yeah, why they did run away from us, THEY MIGHT BE THE TRAITORS!

Soviet Officer: CAPTURE THEM!

the entire Soviet Union goes to alarm. And Splits into Several Countries with different Opinions of what happened. Some of them said Minions did it Some of
them said Stalin Killed herself.

However, Soviet Union Has Collapsed. Due to many many opinions.

While those things were happening. Mel and other Minions were actually on Ice Cave.

There was tons of years between 1924 and 1935 and everybody forgot about The Ice Cave.

However Minions thought this was an Horrible Event. Since their big boss passed out for a Reason they dont know about.

Minions were Mostly Crying for Stalin on the Ice Cave. And judging theirselfs.
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